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Ideas from dreams…

Posted by brenatevi on July 17, 2008

For those of you that don’t know me, or have been privy to my novel, I’m writing a story about a place called Dreamworld.  Yes, I know it’s been done before, but you know what?  If I tried to write about what hasn’t been written before, I might as well go back to watching TV.  Creativity is simply rehashing old ideas in different ways, and trying your best to shape the idea to fit your personality.  And dreams are a very interesting thing.  There aren’t really any rules, and I’ve read that controlling your dreams is a very liberating thing.   Some days I’ve been on the edge of waking and sleeping, and I have no idea if what I was seeing in my mind’s eye was me dreaming, me thinking, or are the two the same?  I do know that there is a very fine line between the two.  So, going over old word files, I found this:

tooth fairy’s heir (dream had brangelina as parts)
lady was doing a root canal? on her “general” when a group of people come up to her fortress/treehouse to challenge her hospitality (something about killing her if she handles it wrong). lady tells one of the guards to get the ninja there to guard then (ninja are invisible and strong, but few) lady tells them that she’s busy working on someone’s mouth and they all gasp. after she laeves they discuss whether she is the Tooth Fairy’s heir.

through the smile shows the soul
metal in the mouth gives metal in the skin
“Damn, sit still. I’d anethetize you, but I’m not sure how you’d react. From what you’ve been telling me, you’re lucky my tools are aluminum and carbon fibre. Don’t make me get the mace!”
“I swear, if I was back home…”
She sighed when the guard cringed. She wasn’t back home.

Never finished, and might never finish.  If someone likes the idea, have fun.


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Getting back in the groove

Posted by brenatevi on July 13, 2008

Ugh, I hate it when I lose my writing groove.  It’s like “Wow, I’m doing well” to “Ugh, I couldn’t write if you gave me a million monkeys.”  But I have been reading.  I got most of the way through the novel that started me down the road of hard science fiction, The Cat Who Walks Through Walls. For those of you uninitiated in Robert Heinlein, this is one of his most confusing works, for many reasons, least of which is that it references most of his other works, but also deals with time, time-line, and alternate universe travel, three completely different vectors (see? I wouldn’t suggest you read Cat unless you are willing to immerse yourself in the rest of Heinlein’s work.) Read Cat reminded me that I hadn’t read The Moon Is a Harsh Mistress lately, so I read it again. Before that I had chugged most of the way through Cryptonomicron again (a very thick tome by the way; third or fourth reading, I think.) I know that I’ve read at least one more besides these.

Oh, and the most important one: Secret History of Star Wars. The reason that this is the most important one is because its what kick started me into writing again (before this little bout of writers’ block.) While the author seems to be angry over Lucas’s inability to come to terms with how the Saga got started, I personally find the process enlightening, and have even started to use a tool Lucas himself had used when making the films: treatments.

You have to understand that most of my writing has come in the form of short stories. The longest complete story I’ve written is 18,000 words. But novels are a completely different beast. I had written over 75,000 words for my novel when I realized that I had written myself into a corner, and then gave up, quit, surrendered. I hadn’t touched the novel in over 5 years, until I started reading the Secret History, and I started out a new draft, but once again ran into a wall (not sure what caused the road block this time.) It’s been two weeks since I wrote anything for the novel, and about that long since I touched Secret History (I got a bit tired of the author ranting about how George really didn’t have a plan in the beginning, is denying he never had a plan, yada, yada, yada… I get it. You wrote 532 pages to say that?)

Having read several books since I stopped, I realized that I was reading the Secret History wrong; if I got bored with what he was saying, skip until I got interested again: ie anything having to deal with how Lucas would pull pieces of old scripts together to form the whole, and things like that. I was looking for inspiration, not rants. I know how Lucas “screwed up” Star Wars. I’m a Star Wars geek and connected to the Internet (in fact, got my first taste of message boards 8 years ago on the Star Wars Galaxies official site… ah, those were the days.) One thing I did discover: George’s divorce was what really buggered the script for the Prequels. If his wife had stayed, the script and editing would have been much better. As it is, I still enjoy the Prequels, especially since they gave us the Duel of the Fates, Ewan McGregor’s Obi Wan Kenobi, and Darth Sidious/Palpatine; Ian McDiarmid was deliciously evil in my opinion. Interesting note: Ian is never credited as Darth Sidious in IMDB (might have to watch the end credits to see if that name is mentioned; makes sense if he wasn’t.)

Any ways, the uptick is that I’m working on a treatment/outline right now, and will be posting old stuff again, including old trashy stuff that I want to get out just so people will know how NOT to write.

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